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Pre-Screening QF88

Tue Oct 23, 2012 11:13 am

Here my picturehttp://farm9.staticflickr.com/8469/8115760973_0084b90065_b.jpg
Go ahead critique
 
arndt262
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RE: Pre-Screening QF88

Tue Oct 23, 2012 11:30 am

It has a light yellow cast. Easy to fix...

Arndt
 
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RE: Pre-Screening QF88

Tue Oct 23, 2012 11:51 am

Quoting arndt262 (Reply 1):
It has a light yellow cast. Easy to fix...

I would also add there's noticable noise, it's a little blurry and oversharp to compensate.

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RE: Pre-Screening QF88

Tue Oct 23, 2012 12:16 pm

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8047/8115877085_65ac580846_b.jpg Well I tried reducing the yellow cast by reducing saturation and vibrance. If I was to re-edit instead of 85%, 0.2, 0 I should use 70%, 0.2, 0
 
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RE: Pre-Screening QF88

Tue Oct 23, 2012 2:04 pm

Quoting QF88 (Reply 3):

Still a bit noisy & oversharpened.
 
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RE: Pre-Screening QF88

Tue Oct 23, 2012 7:51 pm

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8047/8116909553_f2abedc8f6_b.jpg
I tried to reduce the noise and eliminate oversharpness by reducing to 70% 0.2 0
 
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RE: Pre-Screening QF88

Tue Oct 23, 2012 8:07 pm

QF88,

It looks better on my screen now.

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RE: Pre-Screening QF88

Thu Oct 25, 2012 11:03 am

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8472/8121716221_98f5034b8a_b.jpg
So what do you guys think of this picture?

Thanks for your opinions
 
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RE: Pre-Screening QF88

Thu Oct 25, 2012 11:13 am

Hi QF88,

Nice photo indeed but due to the interference/obstruction of the fence at the bottom of aircraft, I think it would be rejected for motive.

Also, not sure how to put it, but the colors looks off. Did you use shadow/highlight tool? Over saturated, probably?

Regards,
HB

[Edited 2012-10-25 04:13:55]
 
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RE: Pre-Screening QF88

Thu Oct 25, 2012 11:14 am

Quoting QF88 (Reply 7):
So what do you guys think of this picture?

It'll get motive due to the fence blocking part of the rear fuselage. Do you have a shot taken a second later to avoid the fence?

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RE: Pre-Screening QF88

Thu Oct 25, 2012 11:44 am

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8185/8121795740_75135f3dc8_b.jpg
Here is one I took around one second latter.
 
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RE: Pre-Screening QF88

Thu Oct 25, 2012 1:56 pm

Quoting QF88 (Reply 10):
Here is one I took around one second latter.

A little yellow, but otherwise should be ok.
 
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RE: Pre-Screening QF88

Fri Oct 26, 2012 12:08 pm

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8187/8124669512_2f3e11d8f4_b.jpg
I tried to compensate for the yellow by adding a bit of blue colour balance
 
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RE: Pre-Screening QF88

Fri Oct 26, 2012 3:24 pm

Quoting QF88 (Reply 12):
I tried to compensate for the yellow by adding a bit of blue colour balance

A bit flat, but color looks ok.
 
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RE: Pre-Screening QF88

Sat Nov 17, 2012 11:57 am

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8064/8192138069_8879fdc6c0_b.jpg

Your opinions is welcomed. And my SIA 777 got rejected for being soft. Is that right because first it was too sharp now its too soft?
 
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RE: Pre-Screening QF88

Sat Nov 17, 2012 12:05 pm

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8203/8192198317_19b630e4af_b.jpg

Here the 777-300ER SIA. I fixed the green cast issue but i'm not sure if I should do Additional sharpening.
 
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RE: Pre-Screening QF88

Sat Nov 17, 2012 2:54 pm

Quoting QF88 (Reply 14):
Your opinions is welcomed.

Flat, dark, and noisy.

Quoting QF88 (Reply 15):
Here the 777-300ER SIA.

Looks oversharpened, and there is an obvious dust spot that was missed top of frame.

Quoting QF88 (Reply 14):
And my SIA 777 got rejected for being soft. Is that right because first it was too sharp now its too soft?

Looking at it in the rejection log, it seems like you never posted that one for feedback. Yes it is too soft.
 
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RE: Pre-Screening QF88

Tue Nov 20, 2012 11:45 am

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8062/8201868505_ed8c3d3ec0_b.jpg I've played around with the colour to make look less dull and compressed so if this one gets the tick it will be submitted
 
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RE: Pre-Screening QF88

Tue Nov 20, 2012 7:07 pm

Quoting QF88 (Reply 17):
played around with the colour to make look less dull and compressed so if this one gets the tick it will be submitted

Contrast better, but looks a bit noisier.
 
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RE: Pre-Screening QF88

Tue Nov 20, 2012 8:36 pm

I didn't do any additional sharpening so I don't see how it can be noisier. Maybe when photoshop compressed it it made it more noisy. I really can't figure out why it more noisier
 
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RE: Pre-Screening QF88

Tue Nov 20, 2012 9:47 pm

Quoting QF88 (Reply 19):
so I don't see how it can be noisier.

Adding contrast can easily introduce more noise.
 
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RE: Pre-Screening QF88

Sat Nov 24, 2012 11:02 am

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8343/8213742250_625f55d065_b.jpg

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