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Pre-Screen
Posted: Fri Aug 20, 2021 5:53 pm
by musicman4327
Good afternoon,
This one was rejected (second time) for low contrast. I played with the tone sliders a bit since then, but now, to my eye on my monitor, it looks to have too much contrast, so I could use some help/feedback.
1:
https://flic.kr/p/2mie1o4(note, first rejection also included low in frame, and oversharpened, which I hope I corrected)
These ones are new, trying to figure out which one to submit (Same helicopter, a few minutes apart so I think I could only submit one)
2:
https://flic.kr/p/2mbGk1J3:
https://flic.kr/p/2mbL6u14:
https://flic.kr/p/2mbGk25Thank you for any feedback. Cheers.
Re: Pre-Screen
Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2021 3:22 pm
by Screeners
Hello Musicman,
The fist image looks contrasty to me as well. Marginally passable for me if I was to screen it.
The series of the chopper all need more contrast. None of them would be acceptable IMO.
Regards,
Re: Pre-Screen
Posted: Mon Aug 23, 2021 9:40 pm
by musicman4327
Good afternoon,
Thank you so much for your feedback.
I pulled back on the crop duster's (1) contrast and added a bit to the helicopter's (2).
(1)
https://flic.kr/p/2miTcDK(2)
https://flic.kr/p/2miPmgy
Re: Pre-Screen
Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2021 11:13 pm
by Screeners
The crop duster looks acceptable to me. The chopper seems to show a slight yellow color cast. Otherwise, it looks OK for me.
Regards.
Re: Pre-Screen
Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2021 2:17 pm
by musicman4327
THank you so much. I would not have seen the yellow tint, but I see it now. Cheers.
Re: Pre-Screen
Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2021 2:53 pm
by musicman4327
One more for pre-screen, please.
https://flic.kr/p/2mjhwNEThank you.
Re: Pre-Screen
Posted: Sat Aug 28, 2021 11:40 am
by Screeners
Hello Musicman,
The crop is passable, but if possible, I would crop closer to the ends of the horizontal stabilizer. It would avoid some dead space on either side. I realize you may not have vertical room to crop in this manner. I also think aircraft looks a bit soft and could benefit from some sharpening.
Regards,
Re: Pre-Screen
Posted: Mon Aug 30, 2021 3:31 pm
by musicman4327
Good afternoon,
Thank you so much for the feedback. For this photo of the Falcon, there was equipment blocking my view of the left wingtip, so I was forced to frame the photo how I did. I am already at a 4x3 ratio, so I can't crop any narrower based on A.net rules (I would use close to a 1x1 ratio if this were for my wall at home or something).
I did sharpen it slightly this time, I hope it is not over-done.
https://flic.kr/p/2mkfyxdCheers, and thank you.
Re: Pre-Screen
Posted: Mon Aug 30, 2021 11:06 pm
by Screeners
Sharpening looks fine for me.