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Does This One Have A Chance?

Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 3:48 pm
by rgrand
Hello All:

I know the light on this one is a bit flat. I thought that the cloud pattern in the background was interesting and could get me some "Style" points. I'd also appreciate any general comments.

Thanks, Bob

RE: Does This One Have A Chance?

Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 4:15 pm
by flight
Hi Bob,,

Your right I like that interesting cloud formation.
It does seem a little low in the frame. Maybe you can work on the contrast,
It looks a bit flat, just a bit.

Steven.

RE: Does This One Have A Chance?

Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 4:44 pm
by vikkyvik
Looks oversharpened on my screen in a bunch of areas: "UNITED" title, outboard half of the wing, vertical stab, some of the bottom of the fuse, the doors.

RE: Does This One Have A Chance?

Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 5:16 pm
by rgrand
Thanks, I very much appreciate your feed back. Oversharpening is a problem that I continually struggle with.

RE: Does This One Have A Chance?

Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 7:11 pm
by JakTrax
I too struggle with sharpening sometimes but I'll give my opinion with regard to other areas...

I like the shot. Bit more contrast, and a boost of saturation and I think it'll be okay. I'd also be tempted to shift it up in the frame slightly. And of course resolve any over-sharp issues.

RE: Does This One Have A Chance?

Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2010 9:14 am
by dlowwa
+3 for oversharpened. That's the main issue here, not the contrast, which should be fine.

RE: Does This One Have A Chance?

Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2010 2:51 am
by Tim79
Another vote for oversharpened. It gives the impression of almost being a painting, rather than a photograph.

RE: Does This One Have A Chance?

Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2010 2:33 pm
by rgrand
Thanks again to all for your help.

Bob